User:Fujia0801/China–United States trade war/Mtgravesande Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Fujia0801


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Fujia0801/China%E2%80%93United_States_trade_war?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * China–United States trade war

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * The article is well organized and the sections under Environmental Impacts make sense as they are divided into US, China, and then global impacts. The tone is very neutral, which is good. For tone, in the section about South America, I would change the part that says "China will choose Brazil" and "the excess phosphorus in the land will eventually pollute water bodies" to be less absolute and perhaps say "China will likely choose Brazil", or "phosphorous in the land may eventually...", just because there is a possibility that these events will not happen.


 * There are reliable and up-to-date sources, which is good.


 * For organization, I would write CO2 as CO2.
 * Overall, this article is a good addition to the main article and I understand each section very well. This article improves the quality of the original by adding an important section of how the trade war has impacted the environment in different countries.