User:Fujia0801/China–United States trade war/Sparamin Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Fujia0801


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Fujia0801/China%E2%80%93United_States_trade_war?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * China–United States trade war

Evaluate the drafted changes
-Still in progress, but may need additional sources to substantiate claims.

-Environmental impacts is a great idea for a section to add, but more detail is required in each section. Content is very surface level at the moment

-The subtitles are a bit awkward in flow. Instead of a section dedicated to global impacts, have subsections follow the structure of the first two and have them by country

-Potentially focus on the impacts to China and the United States at first to ensure there is enough detail before branching off to other areas.

-Inclusion of photos and fact box needed

-Good recent selection of sources

-Edit lead to reflect your additions