User:Fukhunglie/Stein Valley Nlaka'pamux Heritage Park/Marcferda Peer Review

Peer Review

Information regarding "Stan Valley" being unlogged is very well written. Good supporting sentences mentioned the Provincial Government as well. It is indeed very important to include different perspectives within this topic.

It was interesting to learn about the ecology thriving in Stein Valley Nlaka'pamux Heritage Park. With over 50 mammal species within, I can understand why this scared Park is a priority for Lytton First Nations and the provincial government.

The protected areas within include the entire park protected by the Lytton First Nation, supported by the Provincial Government.

The editors did a great job to explain the significance and importance of the Park to the Lytton First Nation as they mentioned the cultural significance of medicinal plant gathering and hunting within the nearby area.

The sources seem pretty updated and newly created. There is a very overall strong range and diverse within the sources, dating back from the year of 2000 up to 2015, and everything in between.

Overall, this article was very well done displaying enough primary data regarding the importance of Stan Valley Nlaka'pamux Heritage Park. I really enjoyed reading about the Lytton First Nations importance on this land and the efforts to preserving their culture. I would have liked to have seen more data related to "Park Management; understanding the backgrounds of the representatives involved would be interesting to know. Otherwise, the main body area (Recreation) is done sufficiently and accurately. Well done!

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