User:Fukhunglie/Stein Valley Nlaka'pamux Heritage Park/Tardis420 Peer Review

General info
AnthonyTrasolini, Hf04, SZ905, Fukhunglie
 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Fukhunglie/Stein Valley Nlaka'pamux Heritage Park
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Stein Valley Nlaka'pamux Heritage Park

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall the page was incredibly neutral. Would benefit from images in the Geography section of the page. Citation wise theres also of red missing lines in your references that just need to be polished up if only including a (N.D) for some. I would suggest for the park management, recreation and ecology section there is a heavy reliance on a footnote citation one and while it is a solid webpage that probably had all the info you looking for the majority of the subheading rely on this citation alone if you could find other sources to back up those it would make your points stronger. The park management heading may also fit better under the Indigenous relations heading as they connect to one another. Lead heading could also include more information on the sub headings as it is a bit short. Information wise is very strong, sticks the the content and stays neutral when talking of conflict. There are strong additions to the geography portion and especially the Indigenous culture, however the sentence that is bolded at the bottom of the paragraph that states that kayaking and fires are banned could use a citation for where the information came from.