User:Fuller2019/Tonic water/Jameshu1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Fuller2019


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Fuller2019/Tonic_water?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Tonic water

Lead
The lead section has not been updated, but it already gives a satisfactory summary of the subject. Maybe mentioning a date of origin would be helpful for this section, though I know it is already mentioned in your history section. It is concise and clear, though if you want to elaborate a little on quinine or any other ingredients (if any) that would be great!

Content, Tone, Sources
The content is overall great; it is relevant and up to date! No critiques from me here. Also good work on citing in various places of the article, and the tone was neutral throughout. Also, overall the quality of the article has definitely increased!

Organization
For the fixed eruptions section, if there are any other negative effects you can find, I would talk about those and then rename the section to be more general, as Fixed Eruptions is a bit specific. I also think the Use section could be moved earlier as it is a more relevant topic.