User:Fuller2019/Tonic water/Jeremy Chi Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Fuller2019


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Fuller2019/Tonic_water?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template\
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) Tonic water
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) Tonic water

Lead
The lead looks pretty good at first glance! I like how it is concise and short it is; not overwhelming. If I would had to fix something about it, I think including a summary of your article's major sections would help a lot.

Content
The content is interesting and relevant, knowing that I drink tonic water pretty often. I like how you focused on the uses of it, like for gin and tonic. The tone and balance seems a lot more biased towards the medicinal purposes. Not that it is a bad thing, but I think having more information on the recreational purposes of the drink would be a lot more interesting. Perhaps having a section on the different drinks it is used for. (I heard that people use it for coffee :)

Sources and References
Sources look good! Here's a link for a citing guide Citing sources

Overall impressions
Your changes are very grammar based, but I think that is because its an okay article overall. I'd say make some bigger changes, like adding content, then you should be good!