User:Fungus enthusiast/Roseiflexus castenholzii/Hollow8 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Fungus Enthusiast


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Fungus%20enthusiast/Roseiflexus_castenholzii?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Roseiflexus castenholzii

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: Little short, but dispenses the need-to-know info concisely.

Content: Like the lead, Spartan but informative. Maybe add a little more about the excitation study?