User:Funlovinfriend/Sofia Coppola/Big ol' Brain Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Funlovingfriend
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: Sofia Coppola

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * The lead has been updated as needed.
 * The lead should be updated to include information for "On the Rocks."
 * The lead only includes information that is in the article.
 * The lead is concise

Content
Guiding questions:


 * The content added is relevant to the article.
 * The content is up to date, though there may be more information to be added as of now on her newest film project.
 * There is no missing content or content that doesn't belong.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * The content is neutral.
 * No biased content.
 * Viewpoints are equally represented.
 * Content does not sway reader to a specific opinion.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * All content is backed up by reliable sources.
 * The sources are thorough.
 * The sources are current.
 * The links work.

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Some portions could be written slightly different to be more clear and concise.
 * There are a few grammatical errors. The use of dashes rather than commas or new sentences should be changed.
 * The content is well organized.

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * The content added has improved the article.
 * What are the strengths of the content added?
 * The content could be improved with some grammatical and organizational changes, as well as further additions to newly included information.

Overall evaluation
It was great! I loved the additions you chose to make.