User:Funmi.Ajani/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Médicines Sans Frontières (Doctors without Borders)
 * Article Evaluation:
 * The source provides a cohesive and coherent general description regarding: the ongoing mission, how the organization was established, countries that many physicians have volunteered in, new leaderships regarding MSF development, and in African countries (Sudan,Rwanda,Sierra Leone). The content also focuses on the field mission structure specifically, field mission teams, medical components, nutrition, water and sanitation, and various statistics. There is a mention regarding the dangers volunteers have faced all over the world. Although this source address many subjects in a clear manner there is no mention regarding nurses that also volunteer in this organization. That is one way this source can improve it notability and importance.
 * Sources:
 * Médecins Sans Frontières
 * https://www.doctorswithoutborders.org
 * Médecins Sans Frontières
 * https://www.doctorswithoutborders.org

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Paleolithic Diet


 * Article Evaluation
 * The article has a subjective voice regarding the Paleolithic diet . The author, focuses on the history and the terminology of the diet, explains the foodstuffs and what are acceptable to eat in the diet. There is a mention regarding the health effects specifically the benefits, and how human genes are similar to cavemen and their diets in the past. The article touches on various things but there is a lot of repetition and misrepresentation on the diet. The source that are used do not seem reliable and sufficient and the author word choice could have been written better.
 * Sources
 * Paleolithic diet

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Shea Butter


 * Article Evaluation
 * This provides a quick and clear introduction as to what shea butter is, and how it is made, and also the pronunciation of shea butter in different cultures. Also there is a mention of the history and shea butter's composition, and how it is used. Surprisingly there is a classification or system that explains the type of shea butter made, range from grade 'A' to 'E'. There isn't much information that is provided it a very quick synopsis and has a neutral voice. To strengthen this article there can be more information that discusses the process of making the shea butter.


 * Sources
 * Shea butter

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