User:Futuredoc04/Killer activation receptor/Kmeehan0214 Peer Review

General info
(Futuredoc04)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Futuredoc04/Killer activation receptor
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Killer activation receptor

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think the edits you have made have made the introduction more concise and easy to follow, the original article was very wordy in the introduction and kind of lost focus. I think the lead also describes the main topics of the article well and gives the reader insight on what will actually be discussed in the article. I think the reorganization and grammatical errors that you corrected make the article much more readable. I think you are on the right path for this project, especially for an article that already had so much content.