User:GBP1234/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
(IPhone 4)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(As the one of the most talented and attractive technological products in the modern mobile internet era, iPhone is designed and launched by Apple in 2007, and then quickly changes the whole process for users to engage in the internet. iPhone 4, the 4th generation product of this product line, has brand new design in both of its software and hardware. Its appearance redefines the language of design in the whole smartphone industry, and is still leading the direction of mobile devices development today. I choose this article to fairly evaluate the process of the designing and the selling of iPhone 4, also the revolution of industry brought by this historical product.)

Evaluate the article
(Lead Section:

The article briefly explains the the background of Apple's great iOS product called iPhone 4. This article mainly focuses on the history, design, software&hardware, accessories and reception of iPhone 4.

Content:

The article is strictly relevant to the topic, and the data it shows is up-to-date. However, there might be something missed in the information of accessories because this section just mentions the bumper that is designed for iPhone 4. In fact, there are extra accessories are designed for this product in 2010. For instance, the brand new EarPods and protective case/film.

Tone and Balance:

This article is neutral, and it has subjective opinions towards iPhone 4. The article fairly judges the advantages and disadvantages of the design of iPhone 4. The authors highly praise the unprecedented shape design, powerful A4 chip and camera that are installed on the product. Besides that, the authors also point out that the special antenna arrangement is the key weakness of iPhone 4 because the arrangement finally causes the lost of cellular signal in a certain way.

Sources and References:

This article has enough sources and references.

Organization and writing quality:

It is well-written and well-organized article which does not have obvious grammar or spelling mistakes.

Images and Media:

The article has multiple pictures that clearly illustrates the history of iPhone 4 since the product is initially designed. The images shows the examples of the model and enhance the impression of people to recognize the product.

Overall impressions:

This Wikipedia article has an overall good structure that help us figure out the general history of iPhone 4. This article has strengths in detailing the process of iPhone 4 design, and shows some well known incidents of leaking. It uses plenty of words to depict the hardware and software, which is quite helpful for us to get familiar with the actual performance of iPhone 4 since its formal launch in 2010.)