User:GBrodman/Yellow Earth/BoYangGengJackson Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Gbrodman，TianyouRen


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:GBrodman/Yellow Earth
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Yellow Earth

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

There are nothing I can see, thus I can not comment their article.