User:GEMM98/Mental health in education/Michaeld09 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

GEMM98


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Editing User:GEMM98/Mental health in education - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
From what I see right now, the draft from GEMM98 looks pretty good. The lead is solid and the article body is a good start. I feel as though more information needs to be implemented and maybe some pictures or hyperlinks but it is a good start. Pictures with captions would enhance this article immensely as would more content in the body paragraphs. The organization of the article will need to be a priority moving forward because of the fact that more information will be added so the organization of that information must be thought about. All and all, it is a solid article that needs some more additions, such as pictures with captions, to take it to the next level. Last thing, a references and sources aspect must be added. That is a must.