User:GGLOL1600/Cheating in online games/Meta02 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

GGLOL1600


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:GGLOL1600/Cheating_in_online_games?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Cheating in online games
 * Cheating in online games

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall I like your topic of investigation and the scope of your research. Even though I was not completely able to identify the sections you added and the current sections of the Wikipedia article, my first impression is the lack of sources. I think you could make your article more trustworthy if you add some sources which allows the reader to understand where the information is coming from. Additionally, since your topic might have some real life scenarios (eg: people who where caught cheating) it might be a good idea to add some testimonials, results, etc regarding what happen with such case, what where the consequences, an d all the other factors which might help you enrich your text and allow the reader to get a better idea of the topic.