User:GIlbertja/Forest of Argonne/Alsurafel Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

I am reviewing GIlbertja's work


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:GIlbertja/Forest_of_Argonne?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Forest of Argonne

Evaluate the drafted changes
Content

The content added to the Sandbox draft is relevant to the article. Information on geography as well as history were added that gives the article an immense amount of new knowledge. The content that was added is new information and up to date.

Tone and Balance

The content that was added appears to be neutral with no bias. The information seems factual with no intention of swaying the reader.

Sources and Resources

The source that is listed seems to be reliable and the content accurately reflects the source. However, I would recommend to look towards other sources. There is no information on the publishing date of the article and it seems to give only a brief summary of general Information. The VCU database has a number of peer-reviewed sources that would greatly help and assist with research.

Organization

The content is very well-written and easy to understand. The information is laid out in a way that is concise and free of grammatical errors.

Images

An image was placed that adds to the historical background of the article and adheres to Wikipedia's regualtions. The image is well-captioned but could be adjusted to be more visually appealing.