User:GJaet/Aversion therapy/Jvnon Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

GJaet


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:GJaet/Aversion_therapy?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Aversion therapy

Evaluate the drafted changes
Maybe consider seeing if you can find a comparison of aversion therapy to other methods of therapy?

Nail biting/nail-chewing has a wikilink in the lead and also has one in the "In Compulsive Habits" section. I'm pretty sure you aren't supposed to have two instances of the same wikilink.May be worth referencing Conversion therapy since it is a form of aversion therapy. The conversion therapy page already has a section on it so it is at least worth checking out. Could also fit in the "See also" section.

The page is pretty visually sparse so maybe consider adding a relevant image? Not really sure what that would look like though.