User:GJaet/Aversion therapy/Kekecole Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

GJaet


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * GJaet's Draft
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * GJaet's Current

Evaluate the drafted changes
There is no leading statement yet. I like that you went in and added current findings in the research. I think there are some references that need to be added to which you stated in you sandbox draft. The sections are clearly spaced and organized. I don't see any grammatical errors. The last suggestion I want to add is maybe including where you will be putting your revisions in the article.