User:GJustVibin/Transgender health care/Th4td4nc3r13 Peer Review

NOTE FROM COURSE INSTRUCTOR:

I agree that the overall entry seems solid, but I'm also unclear what the additions are as they are not listed in bold. I believe there was going to be a longer section on reproductive health here but it doesn't seem to be added yet. One other piece that I note could be updated is the section on gender affirming care for minors. the amount of disinformation about this in the public sphere right now makes it a really essential section to update, particularly since most of the care for minors involves only assisting in socially transitioning and possibly using puberty blockers and, in some cases, HRT. But not surgery, which opponents of gender affirming care turn into a salacious slur.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

GJustVibin


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:GJustVibin/Transgender_health_care?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Transgender health care

Evaluate the drafted changes
-good example of a transgender woman before and after HRT, good use of evidence, enhances understanding of the topic.

-well organized, good grammar, a few (if any) typos.

- all sections stay on topic, and introductory sentence introduces well.

- stays neutral.

- good, credible sources.

- could use some more/different info on minor eligibility. different states have different regulations, also, some states have different ages of consent, so what do these states identify as minors, and what are the regulations?

- reproductive healthcare is nice, but it does not include exclusively pregnancy. maybe add more