User:GS214/Social comparison theory/Ylt22 Peer Review

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GS214/Social comparison theory
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:GS214/Social comparison theory
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Social comparison theory

Evaluate the drafted changes
There have been no changes made to the lead of the article. The only changes made have been to the Media Influence section of the article. There are no added images. The original information under the section edited remains but a plethora of new information has been added. A lot of information from studies have been added. There are sources cited but only at the end of paragraphs. I think there should be more within the paragraphs and links to other Wikipedia pages from key words. The information presented is relevant to the topic and up-to-date. However, it is mostly from case studies or not supported by sources. The organization is okay. The smaller paragraphs make into easier to read but there are a lot of paragraphs for just one subheading. The content added improves the article for the most part. The strengths would be the added information. It could be improved by using more diverse sources and information and including more citation.