User:GUENTHS2/Serial killer/Jasmeen.Kaur88 Peer Review

General info
GUENTHS2
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 * User:GUENTHS2/Serial killer
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, you did a good job explaining the introductory paragraph. However, I feel that it shouldn't include FBI information. It'd be better if you included it in one of the sections. It should be just about serial killers in general. You can also include all the sections that you will discuss in this article in the introductory paragraph. The references included in the article do work.