User:G Kielkucki/Hypodermic Needle Model/Jdneumann Peer Review

General info
G Kielkucki
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:G Kielkucki/Hypodermic Needle Model
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Hypodermic needle model

Evaluate the drafted changes
What you have looks good so far and I don't have any additional thoughts at the moment.