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'''Analyzing Article, Feminist movements and ideologies Evaluating content The content in the article is very relevant to the topic. There are many different categories of movements and ideologies that are explained very well throughout the article. This article is pretty detailed and long so I am not sure that any information could be added. The detailed information also seems very updated, there are recent dates with information in multiple categories. One thing that may be improved in the article is organization. I feel like I had to bounce around to look at information.

Evaluating Tone I thought this article was very neutral. Compared to readings we have done in class, this wasn't saying "hey be a feminist!" or ever made it seem like a feminist wrote it. It was just very factual about the feminist movements and ideologies. I really don't think that It overrepresented or underrepresented any points in the article either. The article goes into just enough detail in every category it had.

Evaluating Sources The links in the article that I tried worked just fine. Some of the sources used in the wiki article were magazines and things I thought weren't completely ok to use as a reference, but most of them were history related and seemed like great sources.

Checking the talk page I am very confused on how to get to the talk page, and when I get there I am unsure on how to read it. I need more practice in this area.

Adding to an Article According to "REDISTRIBUTIVE JUSTICE AND CULURAL FEMINISM" cultural feminism can have two major impacts on our legal system. One being women who are attorneys or judges resolving conflicts in ways that differ from men. The second being, if society were to base its substantive rules on an ethos of care, where as male oriented ethos involve rights and justice. This may change decisions made in the legal system.

First Draft According to "REDISTRIBUTIVE JUSTICE AND CULURAL FEMINISM" cultural feminism can have two major impacts on our legal system. One being women who are attorneys or judges resolving conflicts in ways that differ from men. The second being, if society were to base its substantive rules on an ethos of care, where as male oriented ethos involve rights and justice. This may change decisions made in the legal system. There are differences between men and women n socialization and biology, or from the total history of existing as a women. Feminist look at these differences

Peer Review The draft does not draw conclusions to one point of view at all. It just states what happened with the music during this time. There is never any phrases in the article that would lead you to believe the author feels a specific way on the subject. There were no unnamed groups or people. IT clearly states a record company and their name, and women who founded it. The draft itself is pretty positive, but not in a bad way. Again the draft just states what happens and who was a part of it. There were no unsourced statements in the draft. Overall this draft was written very well, was neutral, and was extremely easy to read.

Final Article Kristen Ghodsee gives a very clear definition of what cultural feminism is. "Cultural feminism refers to a specific package of discourses and practices that promote the idea that women and men are essentially different—either because of inherent biological differences or because of gendered socialization so deeply ingrained as to be irreversible." These differences can create a bond between all women. According to "REDISTRIBUTIVE JUSTICE AND CULURAL FEMINISM" cultural feminism can have two major impacts on our legal system. One being women who are attorneys or judges resolving conflicts in ways that differ from men. The second being, if society were to base its substantive rules on an ethos of care, where as male oriented ethos involve rights and justice. This may change decisions made in the legal system. There are differences between men and women n socialization and biology, or from the total history of existing as a women. Feminist look at these differences

For my final article I focused on the legal system and how cultural feminism can impact it. My group did other topics related to cultural feminism. I feel like the hardest part of this project for me was finding good reliable sources. Cultural feminism is rarely brought up in articles, and if it is it did not relate to my article topic. Overall I am happy with this, and learned a lot about cultural feminism throughout the semester!