User:Gab900/History of engineering/MRoger886 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(GAB900)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gab900/History_of_engineering?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * History of engineering

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Where are you most interested but not fulfilled?

Looking back to the current existing article, I notice the new section added in the sandbox was the following.

The beginning of the renaissance had brought forth a new form of drawing and early stages of blue prints. These forms of drawings were called technical, cutaway, and exploded drawings. These types of drawings allowed for a better understanding on how to build, buildings, tools, and new inventions. This also helped speed up the building process and helped engineers understand each others concepts and inventions.

This section was a great addition as it furthers the introduction of the deck of cards into a section which continues into the use of early blue print designs which would be something which would advance engineering. Something I would like to see would be more details on would be on blue prints as it would seem like a large advancement in engineering history considering to this day in modern engineering, blue prints are still utilized to outline information that will be used to manufacture items.