User:Gabbyveauthier/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Abdominal cavity

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I've chosen this article because anatomy is something that interests me and I know a lot about the subject, so I feel that I would evaluate this article very well.

Evaluate the article
This article thoroughly explains mostly everything there is to know about the abdominal cavity. There are a few pictures/diagrams included which allows us to learn and apply what information has been given, but those pictures are not labeled so it leaves confusion. This article goes into detail about the layers of the peritoneum--which lines the abdominal cavity--and also describes a few diseases that occur. There's limited information about what organs are in the abdominal cavity; although, there are links to pages about each organ but I do think adding a few sentences about each organ would improve the article. This article is very neutral, I detected no bias but I do not think it's possible to form bias when talking about the human body. All links in this article work and everything matches--between what has been written and what is written in the link corresponding to it. Both references are reliable and by different well-respected authors, one is a textbook that I have heard of before and the other is a popular encyclopedia about the human body.

In the talk page, it's mentioned the article should refer to the peritoneal cavity and distinguish between them and I do agree. The peritoneal cavity is inside the abdominal cavity and contains organs that are in both cavities, so distinguishing between them would lessen confusion and promote more in-depth learning.