User:Gabbyveauthier/Islamic studies/R72zzr Peer Review

General info
Gabbyveauthier
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://w.wiki/9hQ8
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Islamic studies

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: Lead provides an informative and a well put format that supports the original article. Further enhancing it will provide more familiarity to the upcoming information.

Content: The content is relevant to the topic and does a good job clarifying the information being presented in the original article. No bias and rich in detail.

Tone and Balance: Tone and balance of the article maintains a neutral stance without any bias. The information is presented in a clear and balanced manner which makes for a smooth flow of the article.

Source and References: The sources and references are organized and frequent. They provide a diverse range of perspectives and information that support the main topic of the article.

Organization: The layout of the article draft is organized into specific sections, making it easy for readers to navigate and comprehend but breaking bigger paragraphs up will help with the overall easy flow for the reader. References are arranged and easy to navigate which helps from them being placed correctly into the appropriate parts of the text, contributing to the overall clarity of the article.

Images and Media: No images but their inclusion could enhance the article by visually being a guide and form of reference.

Overall Impressions: The article draft is on the right track towards a great outcome. The quality of content and organization is there and will be even better after further enhancements such as images and more detail into the body.