User:Gabriellagp/Solano County Water Agency/Coltonjohnson2 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gabriellagp


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gabriellagp/Solano_County_Water_Agency?action=edit


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gabriellagp/Solano_County_Water_Agency?action=edit

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead Overall I think the lead does a good job of describing what the Solano County Water Agency does and how it does it.

Typo. I marked the word I thin you want by using **

Content Consider adding a history portion to the wiki to help readers understand the history of the Solano County Water Agency and its formation and how that impacts its role as a water agency.
 * "by providing untreated **water** from the"

Some of the language used in the wiki is word for word from the source. Consider quoting or using your own words to describe the content. This will help avoid any copy write issues.

Content is well written and no major typos exist that I was able to identify. Consider replacing NBA with N.B.A. and hyperlink each time it is used back to the term originator in your article as to not confuse readers with the National Basketball Association. Consider writing out SCWA instead of abbreviating it. The it is not defined when its first used and this may lead to reader confusion. Tone and Balance"Tone and balance of the article are well written and do not paint an opinion carried by the author. Overall the tone and balance is appropriate and does not influence or work to sway the readers opinion of the Solano County Water Agency"Sources and References"All sources and references are current and operable. Some of the information used is directly quoting the source without proper attributions. Consider quoting the source or rewriting the content in your own words to avoid copy write issues."Organization"I think the organization of the article is well done. I think the list of mayors and district county supervisors might be better organized as a chart/table that is collapsable."Images"No images in the article as of yet. Consider adding images of the North Bay Aqueduct or Solano County Water Agency to your page to help visually diversify your page."Overall Overall the content is well on its way toward being a complete page. There are a few revisions required.


 * Small typo errors
 * Copy write errors
 * Clarifying content structure or differentiation