User:GabrielleLohse/The Last Question/Chainthasher Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

GabrielleLohse


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:GabrielleLohse/The_Last_Question?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * The Last Question

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Gabrielle, I think you did a fantastic job and helpful job rewriting the plot's synopsis. From what I could see, most of your work on the summary increases readability and overall brevity. You really made a ton of the story points much more succinct, and it showed in the flow of the article.

However, within your sources, I could only locate one place where you used them to develop your article (this was in your article heading regarding the Dystopian happy ending). I'm sure you already have additional sources planned for the future when we eventually develop the rest of our articles. Since you already have one source for a Dystopian happy ending, I have faith that you will be able to find more valuable sources. If you think you have not contributed as much as you would like, I would advise you to not spread yourself thin and focus on quality over quantity. Most of your time should be focused on Dystopian happy endings before researching others since you already have one good source on the topic. Still, it is crucial to not get married to the idea of adding only that topic to your article. Two good sources that focus on one topic will help your writing immensely.

-Chris