User:GabrielleSlyfield/History of psychotherapy/Cardozaheidi Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

GabrielleSlyfield


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * History of psychotherapy
 * History of psychotherapy

Evaluate the drafted changes
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I have not seen any editing done to his article by my Peer. I don't believe that my peer had added any new material. The content of this article flows nicely, and is easy to read and follow. I don't see any bias. I would like to see a timeline and some other facts on the people that are mentioned, I loved that you had images in you article that showed me who they were. I think that with the added material of the timeline and the facts on the other people mentioned this article can become appealing to all who read it. GabrielleSlyfield did a great job, I cant wait to see what she will add to this article to make it pop even more.