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Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article Title
 * Oratorio dei Filippini
 * Article Evaluation
 * This article has a lot of valuable information for an audience wanting to learn about Oratorio dei Fillippini, but I would improve it by creating a more neutral tone, adding citations where needed, and changing certain vocabulary so that the article is more accessible to all reading levels. Under the "description" section, I felt that the author had some bias while discussing the facade. Some revision could make it more informative. A citation is needed for Paolo Maruscelli. In addition to theses changes, I would add sections that discuss the interior and exterior of the building in greater detail.
 * Sources
 * 1) Review: Borromini’s Book: The “Full Relation of the Building” of the Roman Oratory by Francesco Borromini and Virgilio Spada of the Oratory by Kerry Downes. Martin Raspe. Journal of the Society of Architectural Historians. Vol. 71 No. 2, June 2012 (pp. 238-240) DOI: 10.1525/jsah.2012.71.2.2382) :2)The Oxford Handbook of the Baroque By John D. Lyons, Chapter 19, https://books.google.com/books?hl=en&lr=lang_en&id=G7SmDwAAQBAJ&oi=fnd&pg=PA449&dq=Oratorio+dei+Filippini&ots=Y4BUo-z6D3&sig=znec6uincgzk6m2g0HPJkVOA_OQ#v=onepage&q=Oratorio%20dei%20Filippini&f=false
 * 3) Richard Hyde. (2019) Editorial 62.2 Envisioning the architectural science research agenda. Architectural Science Review 62:2, pages 89-91.
 * 1) Review: Borromini’s Book: The “Full Relation of the Building” of the Roman Oratory by Francesco Borromini and Virgilio Spada of the Oratory by Kerry Downes. Martin Raspe. Journal of the Society of Architectural Historians. Vol. 71 No. 2, June 2012 (pp. 238-240) DOI: 10.1525/jsah.2012.71.2.2382) :2)The Oxford Handbook of the Baroque By John D. Lyons, Chapter 19, https://books.google.com/books?hl=en&lr=lang_en&id=G7SmDwAAQBAJ&oi=fnd&pg=PA449&dq=Oratorio+dei+Filippini&ots=Y4BUo-z6D3&sig=znec6uincgzk6m2g0HPJkVOA_OQ#v=onepage&q=Oratorio%20dei%20Filippini&f=false
 * 3) Richard Hyde. (2019) Editorial 62.2 Envisioning the architectural science research agenda. Architectural Science Review 62:2, pages 89-91.

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Sant'Ivo alla Sapienza
 * Article Evaluation
 * This article is well done and it has a lot of content about this building, its history, its interior, and its exterior, but it isn't backed up by any sources or citations. If I were to edit it, I would do research on Sant'Ivo alla Sapienza and cite where the previous author has correct information, and rewrite anything that doesn't match up with the information I find out. I would not only focus on gener information such as when the building was built, but also learn about the architect Borromini and find out if what the article says about him is accurate.
 * Sources
 * 1) Hatch, John G., "The Science behind Francesco Borromini's Divine Geometry" (2002). Visual Arts Publications. 4. https://ir.lib.uwo.ca/visartspub/4
 * 2) Borromini's Plans for Sant'Ivo alla Sapienza Julia M. Smyth-Pinney  Journal of the Society of Architectural Historians, Vol. 59 No. 3, Sep., 2000; (pp. 312-337)
 * 3) Language Beyond Metaphor: The Structural Symbolism of Borromini's Sant'ivo Alla Sapienza, the University of Arizona, https://repository.arizona.edu/handle/10150/146038
 * 2) Borromini's Plans for Sant'Ivo alla Sapienza Julia M. Smyth-Pinney  Journal of the Society of Architectural Historians, Vol. 59 No. 3, Sep., 2000; (pp. 312-337)
 * 3) Language Beyond Metaphor: The Structural Symbolism of Borromini's Sant'ivo Alla Sapienza, the University of Arizona, https://repository.arizona.edu/handle/10150/146038
 * 3) Language Beyond Metaphor: The Structural Symbolism of Borromini's Sant'ivo Alla Sapienza, the University of Arizona, https://repository.arizona.edu/handle/10150/146038
 * 3) Language Beyond Metaphor: The Structural Symbolism of Borromini's Sant'ivo Alla Sapienza, the University of Arizona, https://repository.arizona.edu/handle/10150/146038

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Juderia de Cordoba
 * Article Evaluation
 * The existing article was good because it was well-written, and non-argumentative. However, if I were to edit it, I would add more content to back up claims the author made. At one point, the author says, "Cordoba was one of the largest commercial and intellectual centers in the world." I would add content that would display how or why this is true. Also, I would elaborate more on the buildings in this area of Cordoba. A paragraph in the beginning mentions Mezquita Catedral, Sinagoga, and Zoco Municipal, but I would dive deeper into each one.
 * Sources
 * 1) GINÉS DONAIRE. (2013, Sep 15). Broken bridges in the Jewish quarter: Andalusian edition]. El Pais Retrieved from http://libproxy.uwyo.edu/login/?url=https://search.proquest.com/docview/1432339000?accountid=14793
 * Sources
 * 1) GINÉS DONAIRE. (2013, Sep 15). Broken bridges in the Jewish quarter: Andalusian edition]. El Pais Retrieved from http://libproxy.uwyo.edu/login/?url=https://search.proquest.com/docview/1432339000?accountid=14793

2) Rosa, Brian, and Jaime Jover-Baez. "Contested urban heritage: Discourses of meaning and ownership of the Mosque-Cathedral of Cordoba, Spain." Journal of Urban Cultural Studies, vol. 4, no. 1-2, 2017, p. 127+. Gale Academic Onefile, https://link.gale.com/apps/doc/A503309407/AONE?u=wylrc_uwyoming&sid=AONE&xid=15cd1372 . Accessed 11 Oct. 2019.

3) RUGGLES, D. Fairchild. THE STRATIGRAPHY OF FORGETTING: THE GREAT MOSQUE OF CORDOBA AND ITS CONTESTED LEGACY. Antipod. Rev. Antropol. Arqueol. [online]. 2011, n.12 [cited  2019-10-11], pp.19-37. Available from: < http://www.scielo.org.co/scielo.php?script=sci_arttext&pid=S1900-54072011000100003&lng=en&nrm=iso >. ISSN 1900-5407.

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