User:Gabyamparan/Atanasio Echeverría y Godoy/NikkiCharlie Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gabyamparan


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gabyamparan/Atanasio_Echeverr%C3%ADa_y_Godoy?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Introductory sentence is clear and descriptive, very good Lead to your article so far, there is no source for cited for this though. You might want to add sub sections, like one section for each expedition he went on, that you go over, so there is more structure to the article. If its possible to find more about his childhood as well as his death, although I'm not sure if there is much to find as he was alive in the 1700s. The article itself is neutral and informative. Both links work fine, maybe try finding the sources for those acritical to see if you can use them, if you have not done that already. Add any other sources you can find, here is just some links I was able to find in a search that might help fill out your article more.

https://medium.com/@Plantadecor/atanasio-echeverr%C3%ADa-y-godoy-3652ee97ab34

https://www.wildthingsgardendesign.com/blog/atanasio-echeverria-y-godoy

http://diccionario.sensagent.com/Atanasio%20Echeverr%C3%ADa%20y%20Godoy/es-es/

Also try to find a picture of his work you can add, becuase it is beautiful work! Good luck and I hope this helped you!