User:Gadzooksopposite/Nectanebo II/Tmitfc Peer Review

General info
Gadzooksopposite
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Gadzooksopposite/Nectanebo II
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Nectanebo II

Evaluate the drafted changes
The Leading section:

I think in the leading section, it give the ancient text about Nectanebo II that current version did not have. And about the Saqqara's part, it also give a very clear information that more than the current version. I think that in the Saqqara's part, it might need more information about how Napoleon's French's research about Saqqara.

Clarity of Article Structure:

In Clarity of Article Structure, I think both Nectanebo II and Saqqara's part, it showing a very clear chronicle that at least I can understand. Only need to write more information.

Coverage Balance:

In Coverage Balance, I think that both Nectanebo II and Saqqara's parts are showing enough information about the brief of life of Nectanebo II, and how the finding of the Saqqara. I think there are clear information about both Nectanebo II's brief and Saqqara's information.

Content Neutrality:

In Content Neutrality, it in a very Neutral way to tell us about the brief of Nectanebo II, and also give enough neutrality information about Saqqara. So in that way, I don't think there are any problems about the Content Neutrality problem.

Sources:

In Sources, it give us 8 information that came from the different author, and these information support the Neutrality of the Content. Just of the ancient text about Nectanebo II, I want to know where is the sources of these text.