User:Gage Thulin/Mathew "Bones" Hooks/Kidyntimms26 Peer Review

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Gage Thulin
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 * User:Gage Thulin/Mathew "Bones" Hooks
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Evaluate the drafted changes
Your rough draft looks pretty good right now. It's kind of cool to write pages on people that actually active parts of their communities. My article looks similar to this and I am writing on Dr. James B. McMillan the first black dentist in Nevada. I feel the pain of having few resources to work with on the article. I think that you've at least started a good document that provides good information about someone that I didn't know about before.