User:Gailelliott/1999 Hector Mine earthquake/Brybene Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gailelliott


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gailelliott/1999_Hector_Mine_earthquake?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * 1999 Hector Mine earthquake

Evaluate the drafted changes
Maybe rather than adding or changing each individual part of the whole article try focusing on one big addition like making your own section or focus on making one of the sections that is lacking and add a lot more to it with detail. I would recommend talking about either the strike-slip portion in more detail or add to the Foreshocks section and give some background on foreshocks and what they tell you about the earthquake and stuff of that nature. This is definitely a difficult article to add to considering it was in a desert around nothing and there is not much you could add but for some creative ideas, our group is adding a section to our article about the history of earthquakes that have happened in that area.