User:Gakeiiyyh/Gender-based price discrimination in the United States/Amanzo2 Peer Review

General info
Gakeiiyyh
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Gakeiiyyh/Gender-based price discrimination in the United States
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Gender-based price discrimination in the United States

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead:

 * I appreciate your edits to the article's lead! It makes it more succinct and concise while still including relevant information into the introduction of reader's into the issue.
 * I also agree with your moving of the examples of the gendered price differences into a new section, the original felt too long

Content:

 * Your correction about the difference in pay for men with vehicle insurance and how they eventually pay less is very helpful and will definitely help to erase possibilities of people misunderstanding the issue and possibly using that as a way to argue against the issue of gender based price discrimination
 * In that same section however it says "some research suggests that women pay more..." are there sources that can be cited to this that shows this claim
 * In the section on discount pricing, can you possibly add to this section to discuss, why or what societal norms or ideas create this "discount" for women
 * In your consumption tax section can you add a reference or discuss the "pink tax" since you incorporate the information on the feminine hygiene products; possibly discuss how its referred to as the pink tax as you do in the lead and then maybe include information on it and the movements about it

Overall:


 * So far I think your edits are very beneficial, retain neutrality, and help a reader understand the issue!
 * The article seems fairly short, do you think there's possibly sections to add? Maybe some considering gender- based price discrimination's connection to gendered economic disparities, connection to the pay gap, etc.

Keep up the good work!- Annabelle :)