User:Galirin15/Anza-Borrego Desert State Park/BigToe42 Peer Review

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(User:Galirin15)
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Galirin15/Anza-Borrego Desert State Park
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Anza-Borrego Desert State Park

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Topic is relevant to the main page

Great section to add and gives the article much more information on the future changes it will experience. I like how you talk a bit about how the climate change will affect visitors, you should expand on that and split the paragraph into 2.

Maybe add some examples of species affected by the changing climate, I know the main article talks about Bighorn Sheep but what about foxes, hares, and kangaroo rats? Also it would be helpful to add some examples of how organisms depend on each other just to provide more context.