User:Gamecockstudent/Nymphon signatum/Radavis12 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

gamecockstudent


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gamecockstudent/Nymphon_signatum?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Nymphon signatum

Evaluate the drafted changes
Since there is no content in the sandbox, I will be reviewing what is on the article page. The lead is off to a good start, but could use another sentence or two. This could probably be added at the end to make sure it hits all the main points of the article. Also, a good start to the other sections. They just need more content. References are good, reliable sources. Overall, a good foundation for a good article. It just needs to be more complete and in depth.