User:Gamecockstudent/Racta/CharlieJ385 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

gamecockstudent


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Racta (No rough draft found in sandbox or sandbox draft)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Racta

Evaluate the drafted changes
I will be reviewing the current article because I could not find the user's rough draft on their sandbox or sandbox draft.

Lead

A solid introductory sentence is included. A brief description of the article's sections should be included.

Content

Very bare, lots of information could be included in sections such as anatomy/description, distribution, reproduction, etc. Images could also be included. No spelling or grammar errors.

Tone

A neutral tone is used well.

Sources

More sources could be included, such as scientific journals.

Overall

The user needs to upload their rough draft to either their sandbox or sandbox draft. Not much is included regarding this topic, so an informative and complete article would be very possible.