User:Gamoch/Janet Kelso/Jbelt21 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gamoch


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gamoch/Janet_Kelso?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Janet Kelso

Evaluate the drafted changes
 Lead 

Lead is captivating and has necessary information. I like how it is split up into two paragraphs. It is a very visually appealing page. Sets up the page well.

 Content Content is covered extensively. Goes in depth for Education, Research and Career, and Awards and Honors. Only thing is I would maybe capitalize the heading "honors." Otherwise this section looks great!

 Tone and Balance 

Tone stays neutral. Never tries to persuade the reader one way or another. Great tone and balance throughout. It's not always easy to stay neutral.

 Sources and References 

Has tons of references throughout and the section is clearly organized. The sources seem to be reputable and are secondary as Wikipedia likes. Great job here, wouldn't change anything.

 Images and Media 

Picture is engaging and makes the page visually pleasing. Good job here.

 Overall 

The article looks great and gets the information across well. Page is organized neatly and information is all coherent. Great job with this page!