User:Garciba0/Capricorn (astrology)/Acechen0 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Garciba0


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Garciba0/Capricorn_%28astrology%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Capricorn (astrology)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Based on the article, the author mainly address on the lead and article body sections. The draft specially discuss two topics of Capricorn. The first is from the astrology perspective and describe its position and order in Zodiac. It also describes the appearance of Capricorn which is related to sea goat and God of wisdom and waters. I think the lead section is decent, it provides the overall topic that will be addressed in the body of the article. In the article body, the author adds more information about the personality that Capricorn person has which is an interesting field that can draw people's attention. The tone is neutral, I did not find any words that can have the author's expression. Overall, I think this is a good start and excellent topic to explore!