User:GardOU/Lyme disease/TrippyVaultBoy Peer Review

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GardOU
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Because there is already so much detailed information in the main section of your article, I feel that it would be best to focus on areas in your article like History, Society, and Other animals. It looks like you have already made an update on the effect of Lyme Disease on cats and the information looks accurate and your source looks reliable. I would also encurage you to add images and other media to support your article. Lastly I would make surevto remeber to update your Lead section to reflect the added information in other sections. Overall I thing your off to a great start!