User:GardenerOfMen/Pentlandite/Tahliafarr Peer Review

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GardnerOfMen


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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Pentlandite - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
The user added a few details to the lead section. I enjoyed how you expanded on why pentlandite is one of the most important sources of mined nickel - I think this is extremely important to add (great job!!)

The location of where it was discovered was added to create more detail, is there anymore information you can add here on how it was found? You could possibly add an image of where it was first located to give more context to your article. I do enjoy how you changed the heading, however, this short amount of information, if you choose not to extend it more, could just be added to the lead section.

Two different headings were added to the article: Identification and Pentlandite Group.

In the identification section, you did a wonderful job of adding a ton of sources to increase more information. I think this section is well placed and provides important information to help with the understanding on the topic. The physical and optical properties are noted well and the context is neutral.

For the pentlandite group, you could possibly add photos of the minerals located in this group. It would allow the reader to see the similarities.

In the Parageneis section, I think it is really important how you expanded on the names of the elements, since some people might not understand the abbreviations.

Overall, I think this is a great start to adding to the existing article.