User:Garrettduncan2/Hords creek/Karlabt Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Garrettduncan2


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Hords creek


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Hords creek

Lead
The first sentence explains what is being discussed further in the page. The information provided for the most part is clear and concise.

Content/Organization
There is a good amount of content in each section, such as the hydrology and fauna section. The invasive species section is not necessary if there was no species found.

Tone and Balance
A majority of the paper is written in a neutral voice, except the use of the word "very" because it could have gone without that word. Another sentence uses the word "relatively" which is not a neutral voice and can be interpreted differently from person to person.

Sources and References
One of the references has the word "december" misspelled. Also, not all of the resources say accessed, some say accesses instead. Many of the words are not nyperlinked which would be helpful especially in the sections for the flora and fauna. There's a reference in parenthesis that does not have a link connected to it.

Images and Media
There are no images to be applied to this draft.