User:GartholomuleIII/Human impact on the environment/Naturalbrigade Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

GartholomuleIII


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Editing User:GartholomuleIII/Human impact on the environment - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Invasive species - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
to start your draft is unbiased and very clear, it also gets to the point. your sources are also great and come from trusted backgrounds. however after reading your article i noticed the need to change a few words in your draft for example: "by whatever means and for whatever reasons have brought about major and permanent changes to the environment over large areas." you need to change the underlined words. Try actually saying why the reasons have brought these changes to the areas. If you cant find it or the reason is unknown, than actually write that. With the changes your sentence would read like: "unknown reasons have brought about major and permanent changes to the environment over large areas". you don't have to change it to that. but its a start if you want to use it. I feel like your edits in general add more examples to the wiki your editing. However this is expected since the wiki does not have an incomplete tag on it.