User:Gatorres25/Mental health among female offenders in the United States/Laurenwaters Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

gatorres25


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Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The lead is relevant, concise, and does a good job of introducing the article content to be discussed. Gatorres25 added a significant amount of research review, all of which appears to be relevant to the topic and easy to read/understand. Her sources are all secondary, and she has not added any primary sources that would violate guidelines, so all of the research is relevant and cited appropriately. The article is easy to read, organized well, and is written as neutral. It is easy to comprehend as written, and has been updated significantly to be more structurally complete. It also offers a good understanding of the subject and is socially relevant.