User:Gavinjarman/KdpD/KdpE two-component system/Nalderkami Peer Review

General info
gavinjarman
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Gavinjarman/KdpD/KdpE two-component system
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):User:Gavinjarman/KdpD/KdpE two-component system

Evaluate the drafted changes
More background information, what bacteria is this usually found in (maybe not species specific but just genus if it can be found), and is there a specific person who discovered it? I think giving the topic a bit more background information would help the article flow a bit better. Hyperlinks would also help for different topics like pH, homeostasis, plasma membrane, etc. The hyperlinks would help with not feeling like every topic has to be explained in detail. Another thing that could help would to be to explain what other systems this topic could possibly have interactions with.