User:Gaydou/Analysis

This is an article that was clearly written by the organization in question. It could very well be worth an article, but it needs a lot of work. Things that might be helpful would be:
 * Changing perspectives to match a single, encyclopaedic third person, rather than the occasional first person.
 * Replacing biased or selective language to be more neutral ("...his marriage is blessed with..." "...charismatic..." and more)
 * Better word choice. I know this is a religious organization's article, but it would be best to avoid using religious terms unless they are the actual, official term. "[G]ospel of Jesus Christ" is an unofficial religious term, as opposed to "The Holy Bible".
 * Copyediting.
 * Wikilinking to appropriate articles.
 * Citations and references.
 * Removing the small biographies of important members. Separate articles, which would then be Wikilinked to, would be much better for this.

To the Light Stream Solution Outreach Ministries, I would like to say that Wikipedia is not your website. It is an encyclopedia meant to make information accessible to all members of the world. A Wikipedia article is not meant to make the subject look glamorous or present it in the best possible light. It is supposed to give the reader all the facts that can be discerned based on available resources, presented in a fair and unbiased way. If you want to advertise the benefits of your organization, I suggest you learn HTML and Javascript so you can create your own website with all the biased information you care to include. If you want to create your own Wikipedia article, I have no problem with it as long as you leave all that self-aggrandizing language at the door and present only the facts of the organization.