User:Gbakes11/Rummy-nose tetra/Mmg0023 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gbakes11


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Gbakes11/Rummy-nose tetra
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Rummy-nose tetra

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hello, Gbakes11. I would first start off by adding to your article draft where you will be adding this information. Since I am not familiar with your article, I cannot justify where this should be added. I also think that you could add a wiki link to "schooling fish" and "golden shiners" if available. By doing this I feel like it can give the reader the opportunity to explore additional information if they desire to. I would also recommend adding your sources to your draft, just so that the reader can identify where you got your information. I would also explain what the information in parentheses is. I'm not sure if you are adding that into the article or if it was something you just were drafting. But overall, I think that the information that you drafted is very good and informative. I think that this information would be helpful for the reader.