User:Gbalic/Gertrude Kerbis/Asheare2 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gbalic


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Gbalic/Gertrude Kerbis


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Gertrude Kerbis

Evaluate the drafted changes
The citations are relevant to the article and seem to be reliable. The proposed intro changes and design style changes are concise and clearly relate to the article. It would have been helpful to add citations to the proposed design style section changes so the content is backed up by sources and reliable.