User:Gcecchi2/Ban Kao/Mads1978 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gcecchi2, article about Ban Kao


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gcecchi2/Ban_Kao?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ban Kao

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

In this sandbox draft, there is not much done, but what is done looks done well. There are many links to other Wiki pages, which shows attempted references. In this draft, there isnt a lead yet or any references at the bottom, but I am sure those are in development. The most fleshed out part is the geography of the region, which is essential when knowing this subject, but more needs to be done. It is also written in seemingly run-on sentences, so there may need to be more grammar editing. There are also headers that show where their intentions are on expanding. Compared to the already existing Ban Kao article, I am not sure how much information this will add, since its looking pretty good already, but new information is always important.