User:Gcecchi2/Ban Kao/Novaarmstrong Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gcecchi2


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Gcecchi2/Ban Kao


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ban Kao

Evaluate the drafted changes
From what I can see in the already existing article, there's not any new information being added in this draft, which is disappointing. There are no references in the references section and the geography paragraph is copy-pasted from the original article; nice for constructing an article draft that doesn't completely rewrite the existing article but again, there's no new information in this draft in it's current state.